This is a very encouraging start to the course. You have fulfilled the brief for the preiminary task and your evaluation is thoughtful and productive. Be especially careful when running type across dark and light backgrounds as this inevitably makes it hard to read. A really encouraging start - well done.
Your research into codes and conventions of similar magazines is excellent, both in terms of content and presentation. Your research into target audiences is proficient, but your own audience research is thin: confined to one question. 15/20
Your main task shows the potential to be at level 4. However you must upload completed layouts by tomorrow at the latest to avoid losing marks for time management.
All three elements of your production show evidence of technical excellence and creativity. To improve, focus on the design of the right hand page of your double page spread. The space between the copy and headline does not conform to the conventions of page layout and design. An excellent effort nonetheless. 53/60
Your evaluation demonstrates excellence in all areas. You show understanding of your choices; give evidence of progression and demonstrate the ability to communicate and present your conclusions clearly and effectively. 19/20
This is a very encouraging start to the course. You have fulfilled the brief for the preiminary task and your evaluation is thoughtful and productive.
ReplyDeleteBe especially careful when running type across dark and light backgrounds as this inevitably makes it hard to read.
A really encouraging start - well done.
Your research into codes and conventions of similar magazines is excellent, both in terms of content and presentation.
ReplyDeleteYour research into target audiences is proficient, but your own audience research is thin: confined to one question.
15/20
Your main task shows the potential to be at level 4. However you must upload completed layouts by tomorrow at the latest to avoid losing marks for time management.
ReplyDeleteYou have made some suggested improvements to your research and planning.
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ReplyDeleteAll three elements of your production show evidence of technical excellence and creativity.
ReplyDeleteTo improve, focus on the design of the right hand page of your double page spread. The space between the copy and headline does not conform to the conventions of page layout and design.
An excellent effort nonetheless.
53/60
Your evaluation demonstrates excellence in all areas. You show understanding of your choices; give evidence of progression and demonstrate the ability to communicate and present your conclusions clearly and effectively.
ReplyDelete19/20
You have improved the type on the DPS. Better still if the pull quote was centred!
ReplyDelete54/60